Hilarious romp. Your premise--how emotions smell and tying that to what your MC needs and wants--is clever. Love how different scents fill the air as the people around him feel different emotions and how that makes him respond. One of my favorite moments is when Hoka is in the dog crate and your MC brings him food. And he responds: "I'm paleo." Many more in this, but the quirkiness of your characters, the fact that the MC is seeking the scent of fear, but he's not someone who invokes fear--all so good!
Hilarious romp. Your premise--how emotions smell and tying that to what your MC needs and wants--is clever. Love how different scents fill the air as the people around him feel different emotions and how that makes him respond. One of my favorite moments is when Hoka is in the dog crate and your MC brings him food. And he responds: "I'm paleo." Many more in this, but the quirkiness of your characters, the fact that the MC is seeking the scent of fear, but he's not someone who invokes fear--all so good!
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
This was good but I have no idea what's going on! I'll have to add chapter one to my saves.
Oh my goodness! "But how do you make small talk with a guy you’ve kidnapped and held captive in a dog crate?"
I know. Just one of the great moments in this.