The way the protagonist's synesthesia becomes both a buirden and a moral compass here is beautifuly done. Most people would've ditched the whole crew at the motel but smelling Amber's fear and hopelessness makes it impossible to walk away. That final realization about being broke after the pancakes hits different becuase it shows how empathy costs more than just emotional energy. Sometimes doing the right thing means ending up with thirtyfive bucks and a kidnapped guy who loves steak omelets.
Oh, he keeps getting more and more invested! P.S. I had to set up a dog crate for a feral cat and all I could think about was Hokas guy. 😂
Haha, I love that! I hope the cat is doing well. :)
Let's just say Hokas guy is handling his captivity much better than this cat!
The way the protagonist's synesthesia becomes both a buirden and a moral compass here is beautifuly done. Most people would've ditched the whole crew at the motel but smelling Amber's fear and hopelessness makes it impossible to walk away. That final realization about being broke after the pancakes hits different becuase it shows how empathy costs more than just emotional energy. Sometimes doing the right thing means ending up with thirtyfive bucks and a kidnapped guy who loves steak omelets.
Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comment!
I can’t wait too read what happens next!