The narration is tight and believable, written with restrained hysteria that builds beautifully toward horror. The clinical details make the story feel grounded until the monstrous shift, then it slides effortlessly into body horror. The ending, with that innocent giggle and phone call, geh, Brilliantly disturbing and beautifully written. ✨🦋
The pacing and voice are immaculate, swinging from claustrophobic realism to nightmare absurdity without missing a beat. The true horror doesn't arrive until the end. Love it.
This is like the fun house mirror to my poem! We were obviously feeling some kind of way when we wrote this week 🫣
Yes!
The narration is tight and believable, written with restrained hysteria that builds beautifully toward horror. The clinical details make the story feel grounded until the monstrous shift, then it slides effortlessly into body horror. The ending, with that innocent giggle and phone call, geh, Brilliantly disturbing and beautifully written. ✨🦋
Thank you!
Body horror indeed! And a fairly terrifying allegory to boot!
Happy to have been able to scare you!
You nearly always can. Make it look darn easy.
The pacing and voice are immaculate, swinging from claustrophobic realism to nightmare absurdity without missing a beat. The true horror doesn't arrive until the end. Love it.
Thanks, Jack!