Oh this is diabolical. The poor guy just wants some nice orange-blossom fear, and instead he’s stuck with a karaoke queen who smells like sour milk and dog shit. Genius move flipping the dynamic so she’s basically bullying her kidnapper. Disturbing, hilarious, and way too fun to read.
Hah enjoyed this role reversal. I do love it when the power dynamics shift so unexpectedly. Also you kept this one brief and the plot moved at a fantastic pace. You don’t luxuriate in the set descriptions and such, this is understandably not in your character's wheelhouse and I appreciate that a lot.
Oh this is diabolical. The poor guy just wants some nice orange-blossom fear, and instead he’s stuck with a karaoke queen who smells like sour milk and dog shit. Genius move flipping the dynamic so she’s basically bullying her kidnapper. Disturbing, hilarious, and way too fun to read.
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it! It's a really fun perspective to write from.
Hah enjoyed this role reversal. I do love it when the power dynamics shift so unexpectedly. Also you kept this one brief and the plot moved at a fantastic pace. You don’t luxuriate in the set descriptions and such, this is understandably not in your character's wheelhouse and I appreciate that a lot.
Oh I’m in love with this!